Page numbers in the items below are from the
Kindle edition, in which page numbers
and their correspondence to print editions tend to be
somewhat fluid. Consequently, depending upon how you arrive
there, the page number in your edition may differ by ±1 page.
- On p. 2, Brown “knew E208 was a high-resolution
video camera…” which “By T-plus-240 seconds
… had run through 1,000 feet of film.”
- Video cameras do not use film. The confusion between video
and film persists for several subsequent chapters.
- On p. 5 the fifth Space Shuttle orbiter constructed
is referred to as “Endeavor”.
- In fact, this
ship's name is properly spelled “Endeavour”,
named after the
Royal Navy
research ship.
- On p. 28 “…the crew members spent an additional 3,500 hundred
hours studying and training…”
- That's forty years—I think not.
- On p. 55 Kalpana Chawla is described as a “female
Indian astronaut.”
- While Chawla was born in India,
she became a U.S. citizen in 1990 and presumably relinquished
her Indian citizenship in the process of naturalisation.
- On p. 57 “Both [STS-107] astronauts selected for this
EVA have previous spacewalk experience…”.
- In fact, none of the STS-107 astronauts had ever performed
an EVA.
- On p. 65 “Normally, when spacewalks were part of
the mission plan, the entire cabin of the orbiter was
decompressed at least 24 hours prior to the start of
the spacewalk.”
- Are you crazy! EVA crewmembers pre-breathe pure
oxygen in the cabin, then adapt to the low pressure of
the spacesuit in the airlock, but the Shuttle cabin is
never depressurised. If it were what would the other
crewmembers breathe—Fireball XL5
oxygen pills?
- On p. 75 the EVA astronaut looks out from
Columbia's airlock and sees Cape Horn.
- But the mission has been launched into an inclination of
39 degrees, so Cape Horn (55°59' S) should be out
of sight to the South. Here is the
view from Columbia's altitude
on a pass over South America at the latitude of Cape Horn.
- On p. 221 the countdown clock is said to have been
“stuck on nine minutes zero seconds for the past
three hours and twenty-seven minutes.”
- The T−9 minute hold is never remotely that long. It's
usually on the order of 10 to 20 minutes. If there were
a reason for such a long hold, it would have been performed
much earlier in the count. In any case, given the short
launch window for the rendezvous, there'd be no reason
for a long planned hold, and an unplanned hold would have
resulted in a scrub of the mission until the next alignment
with the plane of Columbia's orbit.
- On p. 271 the crew of Atlantis open the
payload bay doors shortly before the rendezvous with
Columbia.
- This makes no sense. Shuttles have to open their payload bay
doors shortly after achieving orbit so that the radiators
can discard heat. Atlantis would have opened its
payload bay doors on the first orbit, not 24 hours later
whilst approaching Columbia.
- On p. 299 the consequences of blowing
the crew ingress/egress hatch with the pyrotechnics is discussed.
- There is no reason to consider doing this. From the
inception of the shuttle program, the orbiter hatch
has been able to be opened from the inside. The crew
need only depressurise the orbiter and then operate the
hatch opening mechanism.
- On p. 332 “Standing by for communications
blackout.”
- The communications blackout is a staple of spaceflight
drama but, in the shuttle era described in this novel,
a thing of the past. While communications from the
ground are blocked by plasma during reentry,
communications from the shuttle routed through
the
TDRSS
satellites are available throughout reentry except for
brief periods when the orbiter's antennas are not aimed
at the relay satellite overhead.
- On p. 349 an Aegis guided missile cruiser shoots down
the abandoned Columbia.
- Where do I start? A
space
shuttle orbiter weighs about 100 tonnes. An
SM-3
has a kinetic kill energy of around 130 megajoules, which is
impressive, but is likely to pass through the structure of the
shuttle, dispersing some debris, but leaving most of the
mass behind.
But let's suppose
Columbia were dispersed
into her component parts. Well, then the massive parts, such as
the three main engines, would remain in orbit even longer,
freed of the high-drag encumbrance of the rest of the
structure, and come down hot and hard at random
places around the globe. Probably, they'd splash in the
ocean, but maybe they wouldn't—we'll never know.