The copy editing is not up to the standard you'd expect in
a bestseller published by an imprint of Simon & Schuster.
On three occasions, “Balkan” appears where
“Baltic” is intended. This can be pretty puzzling
the first time you encounter it. Afterward, it's good for a
chuckle.
In chapter 39, one of Rapp's allies tries to establish a
connection on a land-line “telephone that looked like
it had been around since the 1950s” and then, just a few
paragraphs later, we read “There was a USB port hidden
in the simple electronics…”. Huh? I've seen (and
used) a lot of 1950s telephones, but danged if I can remember
one with a USB port (which wasn't introduced until 1996).
Later in the same chapter Rapp is riding a horse, “working
only with a map and compass, necessary because of the Russians'
ability to zero in on electronic signals.” This betrays
a misunderstanding of how GPS works which, while common, is
jarring in a techno-thriller that tries to get things right.
A GPS receiver is totally passive: it receives signals from
the navigation satellites but transmits nothing and cannot be
detected by electronic surveillance equipment. There is no
reason Rapp could not have used GPS or GLONASS satellites to
navigate.
In chapter 49, Rapp fires two rounds into a door locking keypad
and “was rewarded with a cascade of
sparks…”. Oh, please—even in Russia,
security keypads are not wired up to high voltage lines
that would emit showers of sparks. This is a movie
cliché which doesn't belong in a novel striving
for realism.
This is a well-crafted thriller which broadens the scope of the
Rapp saga into Tom Clancy territory. Things happen, which will
leave the world in a different place after they occur. It blends
Rapp and Azarov's barely restrained loose cannon operations with
high-level diplomacy and intrigue, plus an interesting strategic
approach to pledges of defence which the will and resources of
those who made them may not be equal to the challenge when the
balloon goes up and the tanks start to roll. And Grisha
Azarov's devotion to his girlfriend is truly visceral.